Human Naure [Poem]
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Human Naure [Poem]
its_me_kimmy Wed Jan 19, 2011 10:25 am
"Human Nature is to climb"
Said a very wise man I know
When I pondered to him all the knifes in my back
And all the wounds I had to show
I once was so young, just a small day ago
When I trusted all who said "Hi"
Now as I bleed out on the floor
I watch the one I called "My Love" walk by
So I kind of just wrote this today and it fell off my desk and my friends saw it and told me it was good, so I thought I might put it up on here and see what you guys thought as well.
(Warning though: I do not normally write poetry [ever] so please be gentle. ^_^)
Said a very wise man I know
When I pondered to him all the knifes in my back
And all the wounds I had to show
I once was so young, just a small day ago
When I trusted all who said "Hi"
Now as I bleed out on the floor
I watch the one I called "My Love" walk by
So I kind of just wrote this today and it fell off my desk and my friends saw it and told me it was good, so I thought I might put it up on here and see what you guys thought as well.
(Warning though: I do not normally write poetry [ever] so please be gentle. ^_^)
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