paper boats (or some poems i wrote)
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paper boats (or some poems i wrote)
last night i was really inspired to right some crappy poems after reading Dan Soupy Campbell's book of poetry (the title). so hey, what do you know? i did. both unnamed. they're both shitty but i felt better after writing them. i guess that's all that matters.
funny how one simple sentence,
one move of the mouth,
can fill you with so much joy,
even if just for a moment.
funny how that same sentence,
that same rush of pleasure,
can leave you broken and tattered;
blown away with the wind.
funny how all those empty promises
take so long to catch up with you,
but you give up,
because eventually they do,
because eventually your body
just can't take any more goddamn wreckage
from a stupid boy.
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your eyes scan across the crowded room,
but their movements are defeaning.
your attention is stuck on what you're avoiding.
spot the happiness glistening in their eyes,
as they speak to one another.
crooked smiles bright as ever.
your hear the words they mumble;
the glorious sweet nothings.
you can feel the love in the air.
and you've never felt more alone
in a public place,
and you've never felt
such a greater want to be dead.
-----
funny how one simple sentence,
one move of the mouth,
can fill you with so much joy,
even if just for a moment.
funny how that same sentence,
that same rush of pleasure,
can leave you broken and tattered;
blown away with the wind.
funny how all those empty promises
take so long to catch up with you,
but you give up,
because eventually they do,
because eventually your body
just can't take any more goddamn wreckage
from a stupid boy.
------
your eyes scan across the crowded room,
but their movements are defeaning.
your attention is stuck on what you're avoiding.
spot the happiness glistening in their eyes,
as they speak to one another.
crooked smiles bright as ever.
your hear the words they mumble;
the glorious sweet nothings.
you can feel the love in the air.
and you've never felt more alone
in a public place,
and you've never felt
such a greater want to be dead.
-----
Re: paper boats (or some poems i wrote)
Taylor! I love you!
They are both really good! And they don't have to have titles. I've written many with out titles. My favorite is the first one, I think why is because I can related to it, and I can relate to it right now.
You're amazing!
They are really good! I'm glad to see you posted here. (:
They are both really good! And they don't have to have titles. I've written many with out titles. My favorite is the first one, I think why is because I can related to it, and I can relate to it right now.
You're amazing!
They are really good! I'm glad to see you posted here. (:
Morgan- annnnnddddd you're fabulous.
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I love you too! & thank you, I'll hopefully be posting more soon. This club that I'm in at school is in this kind of poetry kick and we had a poetry slam today that I had to miss because I was sick, so I just posted here instead lol!
and fun fact: the first poem was kind of about what i posted in ooc earlier today.
and fun fact: the first poem was kind of about what i posted in ooc earlier today.
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I read your ooc post and I'm going to reply! I promise! I just, I'm slammed with homework right now and I'm mobile so it's hard to say what I want on an iPhone do when in done with frigging biology homework I will reply darling!
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Haha, it's fine. I know what you mean about the homework thing. I've got sooooo many essays and projects due. It's like all my teachers decided that instead of giving us an easy few weeks they'll just swamp us with homework .-.
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I like them....I especially like the second one because that's the one I can relate to the most. Hahaha.
babydoll16508- annnnnddddd you're fabulous.
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So Taylor, I know you don't have a title and everything yet, but since the first one is AMAZING can I have your permission to write it down and give you credit and put it in my school binder? Thats how much I love it! I wasn't going to do it until I asked. Ill put at the end, Done by my amazingly talented friend Taylor (Insert your last name here. I forgot how its spelled haha)
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Thank you!
& are you serious?! o; but sure, that's fine haha! as of now it's titled "funny" by i'm probably changing the name.. idk. maybe i'll keep it though.
& are you serious?! o; but sure, that's fine haha! as of now it's titled "funny" by i'm probably changing the name.. idk. maybe i'll keep it though.
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Okay :D It just, spoke to me and Im like 'I need this in my binder!!' I have a index card that says "Ohia :D" from my friend Kacey before you moved and now I have "Ascolta me...Sei bellissima....Vi prometto" in my binder too. Now this amazing poem by my love! <3
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aw, i'm glad that you like it so much!
next week my school is having a poetry slam, and i think i might read it...
next week my school is having a poetry slam, and i think i might read it...
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I wrote it out and put your name at the end. Some of my friends read it and they really loved it!
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Aw, thank you! It means a lot to me that people actually like my poetry haha. Tell your friends thank you & that I'm glad they love it. c:
I found a few old poems in my folders that I might post later, also.
I found a few old poems in my folders that I might post later, also.
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Yay! I lost all of mine when I got my new computer and everything. They were all blah anyway hah.
And yes, I will tell them you said that.
And yes, I will tell them you said that.
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Yeah, last night I was on my old computer and found a few things saved, so I just emailed them to myself lol. But I'm sure they were good! I have a reallllyyy short one that I'll post right now:
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when you talk to me first,
when we send lyrics back and forth,
when you compliment me,
that one time when you said you love me.
this false hope can be so taunting.
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when you talk to me first,
when we send lyrics back and forth,
when you compliment me,
that one time when you said you love me.
this false hope can be so taunting.
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